
Off on a tangent... I just exploded, and it was the closest thing to being alive
Off on a tangent... this feeling..I gotta have it....eternity
Off on a tangent... defying gravity..standing still, concentrating, never hesitating
Off on a tangent... freak of nature, surpassing the average, thinking lightly....heavily
Off on a tangent... cant stop the auction..I give you this...you give me that
Off on a tangent... if only forever...
Off on a tangent...and I can't be closer
Off on a tangent........
Just off on a tangent
What caused this? Rhetorical
I had to keep on reading this one over and over again because I really could not focus..my mind kept on wandering every line.pun.
ReplyDeleteA bit infatuated with the structure since it promotes diversion from the original course, "off on a tangent", yet meets this curve on the same point each line. Amazed at how whether or not purposely done, both definitions of tangent were gently touched.
Favorite Lines
>Off on a tangent... defying gravity..standing still, concentrating, never hesitating
- Off on a tangent yet perfectly focused, in tune with nature
>Off on a tangent... cant stop the auction..I give you this...you give me that
- Our thoughts go to the highest bidder, what we value most
Raw Thoughts:
How far we are from the origin?
The thought of you breaking that down in your own aggressive yet fastened (in tune with me) kind of way simply delights me!
ReplyDeleteInspired is what u have me.
The origin holds the very begininning of thoughts that trample through our mind. Seems impossible to get to the origin, too many pop ups, not enough storage of memory. That is why we write
Wait a minute is this me going off on a tangent..lol
Its hard for me to speak for others, but I did use "our"...u can decline